Tuesday, April 13, 2010

The Beautiful Manifestation

The Lagoon

Saturated in water
Dive deeper, imersed
No one around
Just silence
Begotten no where else
Blessed simplicity
I am the water god
In my ocean of chlorine
I am a crocodile
Adapted to chemicals
As my clawed feet
Slovenly push me along the lagoon
Of concrete steps
As green water licks
At blue porcelain
None would enter
Not even you
So put it from your mind
And leve it floopping
On cold tile
Go back to your dry world
And leave me here
Entranced by sunlight

1. The voice that i believe is apparent in my poem when i speak is my need for solitude away from humanity and the ongoings of normal life
2. I will try to be comanding, like I am God and they should be honored to be in my presence, because I think that, that is what my poem is about, being your own God.
3. Well I will be having an awkward silence, many arm movements and kind of swim around, you will understand when you see it!
4. The whole thing frightens me but it is kindof exciting to be performing because you get to become your own person.
5. It adds visuals to it which lets people make easy conections to what the writer is really saying.

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